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Amazing

"This story had me on my toes second guessing everything. Well written, amazing storytelling, emotional Rollercoaster. Love love love! "

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Perfectly unpredictable

"This was such a unique and, as stated in the subject heading of my review, unpredictable story! It was well written and I absolutely loved every second of it."

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GOT A HOLD ON ME

"I really enjoyed all of the twists.And turns . I love the way you tell a story with so much emotion."

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Got a hold on me

"So different reading loved the dreams and how it all came together "

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Got a hold on me

"Woooow this was brilliant, beautiful and different love story....Im in awe....enjoyed reading it....ty Author, you are so talented 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Speechless

"I love it so much. So many emotions. I am crying just remembering every chapter I read "

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You had a hold on me!

"This is a fantastic story that plays with the butterfly effect and how small changes can have dramatic impacts. It is a heart wrenching and heart warming story of love, lust, desire, and the journey of real life. The single path that winds through it all. The writing is excellent! Descriptive and creative. The use of repetition and weaving of songs and lyrics enhance the story being told. It is also well edited with very few errors. I would highly recommend reading this story, though grab your tissue box if you cry easily, like I do! "

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