Enjoying it Thus Far

"The first thing I really liked about this story was how despite the story being set in an alternate universe, it still had the feel of the Tokyo Ghoul series. I believe that you captured that very well. The story flowed in a way that was really easy to understand, and the chronological order of events made sense. There were various literary elements in the story, such as personification, similes, and at parts, some imagery as well. There were paragraphs with great descriptive detail, which really helped paint the picture of the setting, however I think adding maybe some more in future chapters would really enhance the image to further heights. The dialogue had a purpose and contributed to the scene, and sometimes to the overall plot of the story. As far as the plot goes, as up to the current chapter (Chapter 7) it seems to be doing very well. It made me wonder what scenarios could happen next as the story progresses. The writing style is easy to understand and keep up with. However, a lot of stories start out strong, but they fall apart towards the end. I would keep a cautious eye on how the story is progressing, and plan out events so that it doesn't disrupt the overall flow. I hope to see more characters from the series in future chapters, and I am interested to see where this goes. Keep up the great work."