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Amazing book 🧡

"This book is amazing and every characters are awesome, adaliha is my favourite, her attitude, her smartness the way she talk very thing about her is sasy and love it alottt And her brother's are amazing super duper cool I love them the way they all whipped for adaliha and sooo possessive and obsessive for i adore it alottt THIS BOOK IS REALLY AMAZING 😍"

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really niceee book . highly recommended . I love their bond a lottt . their sibling bond is great . all the characters are so good . pllsss upload chapters more often love reading themm

"really nice book great bond love the characters love their bond you wont regret reading it for suree"

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Amazing

"This is an amazing story. I love when a new chapter comes out ❤️❤️"

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Amazing

"It was amazing "

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To, my sister

"Hi! Myself Harshita and am also trying to write a book but don't know how to make starting, could you please help me by sending some ideas."

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Lovely❤

"the first thing i like the most is your writing skills its just awesome then the characters am falling nd the boys caring the lil one is adorable i gonna cry please update new part🦋🦋🦋🦋"

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Excellent plot and writing. I was reading it on wattpad but again again it was getting error so now i had to start it again here i was on ch 45 in wattpad while i have to reread here again . Otherwise its fabulous 👌

"Review I liked its plot and the style of writing and how carefully the novel is being written The author did a very good job in selecting the background and nature of characters I just have to reread it again as i was on ch 45 in wattpad while here its being updated relatively slower "

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Can Wilson

"This book is very but and funny but at the same time mistery "

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Update more pls. Rest I really liked you're sorry. It's just fab

"I liked how you portrayed Adaliah's character"

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Adaliah

"It shows familial love and caree Also shows how they come out of their shells Tooo goooddd I reaalllly love this story "

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Loving it a lot if possible plz give crazy updates....

"Loving it a lot if possible plz give crazy updates...."

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I love this novel 😍

"I love this novel so much after I saw all the reels on Instagram. "

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Adaliah

"I liked all the things about it. I saw this recommendation in instagram and then read it on wattpad but now it's not available their so I am reading it here from the starting itself."

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The characters are amazing 😍 like literally in love with this book. Would recommend it to readers who enjoy reading the books on siblings and strong characters.

"I loved this book especially the characters. The strong aura and strong characters of this little girl is literally amazing. And the siblings bond just woww. To the people who love strong characters this book is for you. "

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soo goodd 💫

"it is so interesting book 🫶eagerly waiting for ur books.... and yaah keep it up author 🤞❤️..... and also update ur other books... ╰(*°▽°*)╯(●'◡'●).... cant wait to read them also... 🫀💫"

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Adaliah

"I have really enjoyed this book so far. The characters are strong. They make a lasting impact on the reader. I feel Adalaighs character should be older than 4 years old. Her character is more in the 7 to 10 year range. I wish you would post updates more often. I have found that I lose interest when the updates take too long. I'll find a book that's completed. There's nothing worse for an avid reader than to not be able to finish a story. I have a feeling you maybe won't finish this book. You are writing for comments. Not for the pleasure of the act or for the readers. Not everyone posts something. I've read well over 200 books on Inkitt nd have never left a comment. It's wrong to put conditions on your book updates. You should write because you enjoy it. Not because you want 200+ comments"

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