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If you love Star Trek, Battlestar Galactica or Stargate This is a fantastic book to read!

"Scott Sellars’ The Veil is a masterful entry into the science fiction genre, delivering a gripping tale that blends intricate world-building, razor-sharp dialogue, and unrelenting suspense. Fans of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Battlestar Galactica, and Stargate will find themselves right at home with the novel’s ability to weave deep, character-driven narratives into a richly detailed and immersive universe. Sellars excels in creating a layered world where every detail feels purposeful, from the stark politics of interstellar alliances to the haunting mysteries lurking beyond "The Veil." The story's universe is as expansive and complex, but with an added layer of existential dread. The dialogue in The Veil is a standout feature. It’s smart, authentic, and perfectly calibrated to reveal character while advancing the plot. Sellars’ characters feel alive, their exchanges crackling with tension, humor, and raw emotion. It’s reminiscent of the interplay between the Stargate team members, where camaraderie and conflict collide to create unforgettable dynamics. Sellars’ ability to sustain suspense is nothing short of remarkable. The Veil thrives on keeping the reader on edge, balancing moments of quiet introspection with high-stakes action. Each revelation peels back another layer of intrigue, ensuring that the pages almost turn themselves. Ultimately, The Veil is a tour de force of science fiction storytelling. Scott Sellars’ deft touch with dialogue, world-building, and suspense places him among the genre’s greats. Whether you're a fan of DS9's moral complexity, Battlestar Galactica's intensity, or Stargate's adventurous spirit, The Veil is a must-read. This is sci-fi at its most compelling—a tale that challenges, thrills, and stays with you long after you’ve turned the final page."

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Low on the technicals, but a good start

"Thought I would give this a read since the genre is similar to my own work, but the setting could not be more different! The universe of the Veil is quite vibrant, full of strange races and interesting factions. The tone of the story is light, despite the premises: A rogue accepts a stowaway to their home planet named Jin on the promise of big reward, ends up attracting the attention of the cartel. I thought the pacing is quite nice and the descriptions of the races quite vivid. The strength of this story is in its interesting setting and the interaction between the characters. That said, I would caution against throwing too many technical jargons at the reader at the start. There are some interesting characters in this story - kudos to the author - focus on their lives instead! Another thing to watch out for is the technical aspect of the writing. The ellipsis is used quite liberally - and I understand this could be a character's unique speech pattern - which can have unintended consequences, such as slowing down the pace of an exciting or emotional scene (such as when characters reunite with family). Overall, I find this work a relaxing read. I would recommend reading the dialogue out loud, and pause every time there is ellipsis (.....) This way, you'll be able to determine if you're pausing too much. Good work and keep it up!"

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