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Diamond duster

"So far so good kind of a crazy plot twist I'm enjoying the characters but you went from young to older really quick defiantly wasn't expecting that last jump waiting on more"

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And then?? And then????

"I like the dual worlds!!"

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Diamond duster a wetern novel

"This story is intriguing an it makes you want to keep reading but it is a bit unrealistic an it is a book for younger people with imagination."

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Where is the rest of it??

"Was really getting into this story, then it just seemed to randomly end. Am I missing something? Does the prologues talk of memories have a deeper meaning in the scope of the story? Sure, we see both of this mans destinies, life and death. But the story just ends when they collide, and there is no explanation. Why?? Who is the bounty hunter? Who hired him? How did they know Flint McGraths ghost would come back 12 years later? Was the water basin a portal? EXPLAIN! WRITE MORE TO THIS PLEASE!"

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