Queen of my heart
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Queen of my heart

This story contains themes of: assault

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Story Notes

Romcomedy

Summary

This is the story of Arjun and Priya... Arjun hates priya but Priya loves him Both are childhood best friends who met accidentally... Even the word FriEND has an end..... Their friendship too ended due to misunderstandings and manipulations... Friendship turned into hatred for Arjun.. and the same friendship turned into love for Priya.. Arjun Mehra, 32years old the famous Orthopedician in Mumbai, rich, arrogant, playboy, heart breaker for girls ,cold-hearted and strict to his juniors but he is super caring towards his family members...and hates priya like everything.. Priya,25years old, is orphan, naive, innocent,caring, and loves Arjun like everything.. He is the only light in her dark life.. She worked hard to become a doctor only for her Arjun..He is the centre of her universe...She is presently doing post graduation in Surgery 1st year.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
44
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

PROLOGUE

Mumbai


"Arjun, please listen to me. Don't leave me Arjun.I will die without you. I haven't done anything Arjun. Please trust me." begged Priya to Arjun by holding his hands..


Arjun jerked her hand away and glared at her.. If looks could kill, she may be under 6 foot ground by now..


"Trust you !!??  Get away from me, u bitch. Don't show your face to me ever again, you bloody orphan. Don't act innocent, I know what you are now.I trusted you, treated you as a best friend but you showed your true colors" yelled Arjun.


" Arjun, your father is wrong here, he is trying to create drift in our friendship, Even though I'm an orphan, I know value of relationships and family than anyone. But your moron father forgets the relationships and plots against his own son's happiness. He is fucking ......."


Before she could say anything, Arjun slapped her on her left cheek too hard that she fell on the ground due to the impact and blood is oozing from her lower lip. She is shocked, she never expected her Arjun to slap her. Her body is shaking due to fear for the first time by seeing her love, who is looking at her with anger radiating from his body.


By seeing her trembling form, arjun's eyes softened but immediately masked with cold look.. He too never had thought he would raise hands on her......his Princess , who he promised to protect forever.


Arjun left her trembling form, and went away from her by giving her a final warning, "never show ur face again, I will kill you if I ever see you again"


With that he left, he left from her life, but not from her heart........


He left her. His eyes became glossy with tears due to the pain in his heart. The pain of moving away from his princess, the pain leaving the one and only best friend who he owes to protect, the pain for the slap he had given her. His heart says him to get her, to trust her but his mind says him to stay away from her. Finally in the internal battle, his mind won.


But he doesn't know that the girl who he left will become his "Queen of the heart".

Let Bleedingrose know what you thought about this chapter!

Bennettkick
Bennettkick

Hi Bleedingrose,

I just finished reading your story Queen of My Heart and I absolutely loved it. Your writing is charged with raw emotion, intense drama, and layered relationship, I could vividly imagine these scenes stunningly rendered in a comic.

One scene that really stood out is the prologue when Priya pleads with Arjun, crying out “Don’t leave me… I will die without you,” only for him to pull away and harshly reject her. The raw pain, her tear‑stained eyes, his cold glare, would translate powerfully into expressive panels full of emotional contrast and tension.

Another unforgettable moment is when Arjun slaps Priya across the face, sending her crumpling to the ground in shock. Her trembling form and his conflicted sorrow in his eyes immediately afterward, this emotional fallout scene is exactly the kind of high-impact moment that looks incredible in dramatic comic layout.

Your story’s blend of heartbreak, friendship-turned-betrayal, and emotional upheaval offers vivid visual storytelling opportunities, from intimate close-ups of Priya’s tears to wide framed shots capturing distance between them in their fractured connection.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw Queen of My Heart into a comic/manga. No pressure, of course, I just feel the emotional intensity and Mumbai‑based setting would come alive in a visual adaptation.

You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (bennett_lol). I’d be thrilled to explore collaborating and bringing your intense, heartfelt story to life visually.

Looking forward to possibly working together!

Regards,
Bennett.

a year

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