El Diario De Eva by Mag at Inkitt
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El diario de Eva

Summary

Nos han criado desde el punto de vista de Adán el primer hombre pero ¿Que pasaría si le echamos un vistazo a los relatos que dejó en escrito con hojas y ilo Eva? (Este mini relato sale directo de mi AU (universo alterno) de hazbin hotel por lo que no me basaré prácticamente nada en ninguna biblia por respeto)

Genre
Other/Fantasy
Author
Mag
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Capítulo 1 -La llegada-

Hace 2 oscuras noches he llegado aquí, cuando abrí mis ojos me sentí desorientada y no entendia que pasaba pero quién dice llamarse Adán me guío diciéndome quien era yo y dónde estábamos


Según el este lugar se llama el Edén, me gusta mucho me causa un sentimiento extraño... Lo llamaré "paz interior" me gusta esa palabra


Este Adán también me explico que mi nombre es Eva un poco extraño a mi parecer creo que lo improviso sobre la marcha


Intenté recordar algo antes de aparecer aqui pero todo es oscuro cuándo cierro mis ojos y pienso, a decir verdad al principio cuándo vi mi reflejo en lo que Adán llama Agua me asusté bastante hasta pegue un salto


Sigo sin comprender a qué se refería cuándo dijo que salí de su cosquilla ¿Que cosa es una costilla? Supongo que en algún momento lo averiguaré


E.


Estaba haciendo estos garabatos cuando un tierno pajarito se poso en mi lápiz, era tan pequeño que cabia en mi mano, decidí quedarmelo :)


(Hice un dibujito de Eva:))

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1. Capítulo 1 -La llegada-
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