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𝙏𝙤́𝙢𝙖𝙢𝙚 ᵗᵒˡˡ

Summary

Tom le llega una inesperada llamada, avisando que su padre había muerto y que el se tendría que hacer cargo de su hermanastro.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
20
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

𝗔𝗖𝗟𝗔𝗥𝗔𝗖𝗜𝗢𝗡𝗘𝗦

✰ Si ves algún error de ortografía házmelo saber.


✰ Si no te gusta el toll puedes irte.


✰ Porfavor no tiren hate a esta historia o a mi.


✰ Intentaré actualizar lo más pronto posible.


✰ Si necesitan aclaración sobre algo, comentalo y se lo aclararé.


✰ Si eres sensible es mejor que no leas esto, ya que toca temas delicados.


✰ Díganme si les va gustando la historia y si les gusta no se olviden de votar. ♡


✰ Soy una escritora reciente, si quieren, pueden darme consejos para una mejor redacción y historia. ♡


Eso es todo.

TOM KAULITZ

-19 años


BILL KAULITZ

-16 años

(Mañana subo todos los capitulos)

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