A very unique way to write

"Pretty interesting take on an older version of Yuji Ichadori. The only thing that kept sucking me out of the fanfiction's immersion was the weird formating. For example why when someone says something, you put it in bold and write the text -Like this?- It's a unique way to do things, but all the bold text hurt my eyes and took me out of the world you're trying to build upon. If you want to write character dialog, do it "Like this." If you wanna be different, keep it -Like this- but don't have so much bold text. A bold text is supposed to emphasize a word or action. There was little grammar, spelling and spacing mistakes, but those can easily be fixed. Don't give up, keep writing and keep improving! ^^"