"Charlatan Series""

"SarahJayne13" You have written a fine love story, modestly constructied Between a Doctor who had lost his love, HANA, moved from the area to start his own clinic and take care of patience properly and his way. A twelve year old Girl knocks on his clinic door, looking for work, and highly recommended by a friend of both persons, Raelin. Six years pass and both realize that the working friendship has indeed, morphed into a secret bond of Love. Second love for the Doctor and first love of the young apprentice. nicely presented and very thoughtful of your characters emotions and interactions with one another...........a few punctuation and grammar issues otherwise a five star performance. william elliott"