Complete or Opposed Review

"I enjoyed the juxtapositions of opposites and the rhetoric devices (especially the antithesis in stanza 1 and the anaphora in stanzas 8,10,&11. I believe the author show amazing technical skills, as punctuating poetry in general is tricky, but still the punctuation remains tricky it doesn't completely clear up meaning. This can lend an air of mystery to the overall plot. Plot is tricky as poetry doesn't need plot, nevertheless a loose net of story line can be found if thrown deep enough. Overall, the poem made me think of the mulitverse. I enjoyed the blankverse layout as well as the repitition: opening with ocean, closing with ocean, ocean in the middle."