Hinata estaba en una relacion con su novio Naruto, era feliz en su vida... bueno hasta que su novio tuvo un problema familiar, habian despedido a su madre, y ahora no tenian como mantenerse, ella queria ayudarlo, pero su madre no acpetaria recibir ayuda de ella, porque no la acepta como nuera, por otro lado tenia otro problema... las amigas de su novio, ella las odiaba, por ser la mas lindas de la escuela y por cada que queria hablarles sobre el rubio pidiendoles ayuda estas le decian que no merecia estar con Naruto, cada vez que estaba con Naruto y ellas estaban presentes la miraban con una mirada amenazante... bueno al menos su novio la amaba y no la cambiaría por ellas... bueno eso pensaba hasta que recibio un golpe de realidad
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Nami
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Shocking
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Good Writing
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Great Character
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sanriosoul929: I really liked this story there were some grammatical errors like missing commas in a list but it didnt take away from the story and they are so cute together!
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IndianGirlWriter: Loved the story. Felt all the emotions. Loved how you made her stand up for herself and made her fight back.
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Mmn75: That was a great book to read! Cliffhanger though, I really hope this is maybe a series?🤞
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Felicia: The story is good, but definitely feels unfinished.
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Roxx@n: It was longer, it was a really good read. I enjoyed it a lot. Wanted to see if Carlos became a great dad and he Grayson his friend out loud. He's rather closed off so a lil broader back story would be nice. And yes the wedding and twins announcement. A girl can hope right?
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Faerah: Strong plot. Really good characters. I agree that editing will only improve the quality of the story. There were inconsistencies with timelines (mother's death) and narratives changed in later chapters to fit for an emotive dialogue. Couple of twists were timed well. Would love for the author to wr...
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Deonna: Another wonderful book from JaneAnne! Lacey and Kaid were absolutely perfect for each other from the very beginning. The character growth and emotional roller coaster were excellent. Definitely worth reading and adding to my favorite books reading list. 🩶❤️
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