Inkitt
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A creepy story unlike anything I’ve read before!

"There’s so much to say about what you’ve got so far! The first one really drew me in with its psychological creepiness. The gradual buildup of tension and anxiety was very well executed, and I found myself really empathizing with the main character. I also appreciate that the story left some questions unanswered, which kept me thinking about it long after I finished reading. If you decide to continue this story, I would definitely be interested in reading more! The second story was equally impressive, but in a different way. As someone who lives in an island similar to the one in your story, I found the concept of a terrifying creature hitting our area to be quite frightening. Your descriptions of the creatures were very effective in creating a sense of dread and horror. I also appreciated the Lovecraftian vibe the story had. Overall, I say your writing is exquisitely unique! You are able to capture and transmit emotions flawlessly. Your ideas are very different as well as your way of describing things. It seems like your view of the world is very different, and I’m absolutely excited to explore it through your writing! "

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This is an interesting book.

"This is an interesting book, and it definitely has an interesting narrative. Great job! And good luck on future chapters! Can't wait for them! Keep up the good work."

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Very suspenseful writing

"The writing is very good and the energy of the story is maintained throughout. I have enjoyed reading this work so far"

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