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Lass mich

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Summary

Nur ein paar Zeilen, die mir während eines Konzertes eingefallen sind. Die Musik der Band Copperhead County hat mich dazu inspiriert. Es ist nichts großartiges, aber vielleicht gefällt es ja jemanden. Man könnte es als Song oder Gedicht sehen.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Lass mich

Gitarrensound erfüllt den Raum

Im Hintergrund die Drums

Der Bass wird hoch gedreht

Lässt die Musik in den Knochen spüren


Die rockige Stimme des Sängers erklingt

Und ich Mitten drin

Auf der Tanzfläche

Fühle nur die Musik


Lass mich tanzen

Lass mich rocken

Heute Nacht


Mein Körper bewegt sich von selbst

Geleitet von der Musik

Vergesse für einen Moment den Alltag

Die Sorgen sind weit weg


Ein langsames Lied beginnt

Die Musik und der Text

laden zum Träumen ein

Berühren einen in der Seele


Lass mich fühlen

Lass mich vergessen

Heute Nacht


Wieder ein schnelles Lied

Holen mich zurück

Und nach jedem Lied

Gibt es großen Applaus


Lass mich tanzen (einfach nur tanzen)

Lass mich rocken (einfach nur rocken)

Heute Nacht (für heute Nacht)


Lass mich fühlen (nur fühlen)

Lass mich vergessen (alles vergessen)

Heute Nacht (für heute Nacht)


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Das war es dann auch schon.

Hab hier allerdings noch ein paar Zeilen, die mir später noch eingefallen sind, aber nicht mehr ins Lied/Gedicht gepasst haben:

Lass die Musik erklingen

Entführ mich in eine andere Welt

Schalte meinen Kopf aus

Lass mich nur fühlen

Einfach nur fühlen


So, damit verabschiede ich mich für dieses mal.


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