Histoires D'antan by naerin at Inkitt
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histoires d'antan

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Summary

a collection of my old poems.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

old love story

2017, december.

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it’s been such a long time,

since i’ve felt your skin on mine,

oh what a sad crime,

and i can’t see the moon shine...


darling, please take my hand,

and dance with me through the night,

watch me make a land,

for me and you tonight.


i’ll miss your silver-tamed eyes,

they’ve always shined so bright,

they make such marvelous skies.

thus, this is why i write.


i like to write about you and i,

and our antiquated love story.

i still remember, even as time passed by,

how you kissed my lips so boldly.


i still see our rendezvous,

right past 9th avenue,

stealing secret kisses,

making silly prances.


i like to sing about you and i,

those secret little notes,

but darling, i won’t pry,

but i’ll do send you a note.


i think i should stop here,

but hell, i’d miss you.

still i’ll be right here,

writing about me and you.

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