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Who is stalking who?

"I know this is too early to give a review, but I love this story! I love her personality which sounds badass bitch! And I also curious about the person who's stalking her *smirk* *smirk* even her system cannot detect him! I really need more update! Can't wait for the spicy scene! Hehehe"

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Throbbing With Action And Verve

"The lore enriched history of Ethereal Island is as diffusive as its namesake; there is a natural instinctive pull that ripples -- which is felt in the interwoven narrative of simile and metaphor. It moves at a pace that invites and does not deters; it's pockmarked with mystery and intrigue, but also sliding through its bones, is something familiar - The Hunt. This is a predator teasing its prey; as lustfully as the author does their reader. The author does a masterful job in teasing tantalizing glimpses of what is sure to be an explosive cat-and-mouse between the intrepid Kyla and the mysterious cryptid that lingers at the fringe of metaphor and simile; and the exquisitely structured narrative. At the close of 3chapters, I was compulsively stabbing the next button: hungering for more!"

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