What is your opinion?
Off to a great start!
"This story has potential, although I agree that the author's notes should be posted elsewhere. It is quite intriguing and I like the premise. I cannot say much about the author's style or the plot of the story, because only one chapter has been released. I wish the author inspiration and good luck, and keep up the good work!"
Very Intriguing
"I am not a very keen reader of fantasy romances but I am so confident that this plot has both interest and potential. Your writing style is a bit informal with author notes at the end of each chapter. My suggestion is to not do that and post author Notes on your wall or as a separate post within the story. Moving on to the story, I am invested, it has its way of capturing you into the story and the pace is amazing in my opinion. All the best to you Author-nim. You are doing a great job with this one!"
