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sex

"this was really really well written I really enjoyed it."

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The encounter

"I like the details and everything. It opened me up to a lot about sex, that’ started long before !!"

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Sex

"It was great , but I was expecting more romance act . Write more great chapters like these "

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Im amazed.

"I have recently started writing a novel and before this I used to write short stories. Long writing short i really just love how intricately detailed this short passage is, its like sitting there watching two people explore eachother hesitantly. I appreciate the effort "

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