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Cholo |NamJin|

Summary

Namjoon encajaba perfectamente en la descripción de "cholo" y Seokjin muchas veces era catalogado como un "fresa" Dos persona asi no podrían estar juntas ¿cierto? -"Me encantas Seokjin, me gustas demasido!"- Namjoon grito fuertemente Jin no pudo responder a tal confesión del tatuado, ¿que se supone que se responde cuando alguien te confiesa que le encantas? No debería corresponderle al cholo, o ¿tal vez si? 🍓Pareja principal y única: NamJin 💀 Extensión: 5 capítulos 🍓 Alrededor de 1,500 palabras por capítulo 💀 Escrito en 2022 🍓 Publicada: 30/10/23 por Lan Hope. Historias original y completamente mía. Hope Lan ☁️ Portada editada y creada por mi.

Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

💀Datos🍓

Cholo fue escrito desde un principio como un one shot, la idea era manejar la historia en un solo capítulo como la mayoría de mis historias que se encuentran en mi perfil pero al final decidí dividirlo en capítulos.


La historia era realmente larga para mantenerlo en un solo capítulo, eran 6000 o hasta más palabras así que dividirlo creo que fue la mejor opción.


Personajes.


💀 Namjoon (25) considerado un cholo en su barrio por su apariencia y su forma de ser.

[La imagen fue editada por mi, por eso le puse los creditos]



🍓 Seokjin (22) por su forma de ser, de actuar y de vestir muchos lo consideran fresa, es muy querido en el barrio por ser muy amable y cordial con todos.


La historia es Namjin como siempre, de verdad espero que les guste y que la disfruten. Es una historia sin mucho trama pero creo que es bastante entretenida y linda, realmente la tenia escrita desde hace bastante y quería publicarla en lo que termino de escribir bestia.


Espero su apoyo como siempre, gracias de antemano.


Lan Hope ☁️

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