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Alex's Awakening

"This book is so good I haven't been able to put it down. I admire Alex... takes guts. I sure hope her parents don't catch her"

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Alex’s Awakenings

"Very detailed descriptions"

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Opera

"Excellent read. The ending at the opera was intense!"

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Good

"Good so far "

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Awesome

"This was and awesome story. It was so erotic that it made me moist between the legs."

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Smokin hot!

"Wonderful and sexy adventure, with a true “cumming” of age plot. I’m enjoying the style, the characters and of course the explosive sex. Outstanding!"

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Excellent story. The plot is very good. It's very well written in a well connected and fluent style. It's really worth reading.

"I like the story.its very well written. The plot is good and the authors writing style is such that the reader never feels bored. This is the reason I give it high rating.i will definitely recommend it to my friends. "

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Alexa's Awakening

"Too many redundancies, missing words in sentences, improper sentence structures. One example was Alex opened a condom and removed it while doing her sex ed talk, then two paragraphs later she ripped open the condom package with he teeth."

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anon

"interesting"

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Growing

"I love the plot. The dialogue needs more work, but you are getting there. It takes a lot to be able to balance the writing out to flow where the audience can picture it all, and still be attentive to what the characters are saying."

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good

"The book is well written and has great spicy content "

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