Prologue
-Josie-
The atmosphere surrounding me brimmed with joy and anticipation as my bridesmaids encircled me, helping with the final preparations. A wide grin spread across my face as I looked at myself in the mirror, taking in the elegance of my wedding gown and the beautiful veil cascading down my back. My heart fluttered with excitement, unable to contain the happiness surging within me.
“Just one last toast before you’re officially off the market,” quipped my best friend, Katie, rising from her seat with a glass in hand, her eyes brimming with mischief.
I chuckled at her playful remark. “You make it sound like I’m headed for a life sentence.”
“Close enough,” she teased, her tone affectionate as she raised her glass alongside mine. “Let’s take a moment to cherish being together, enjoy this beautiful day, and witness your happily ever after.”
We raised our glasses in unison, laughter and cheers filling the room. But as I took a sip, my attention was drawn to the door, which creaked open slightly, revealing the concerned expression of the best man. I sensed something was amiss as I watched him motion for Katie to join him outside. She obliged.
While the other bridesmaids continued chatting around me, I watched the two of them, noticing their expressions fraught with urgency and their mouths moving rapidly. As the other bridesmaids began gathering their belongings, a sense of unease settled over me.
“Ready, Josie?”
When I didn’t respond to one of my bridesmaids, the room fell silent. I watched Katie, seeing the way her expression shifted as she glanced back and locked eyes with me. In that moment, a different kind of tension pulsed between us, one born of unspoken understanding. It was as though I could already sense the news she was about to deliver, though I desperately wished it weren’t true.
“What’s going on?” someone ventured, their voice muffled by the haze of confusion enveloping me.
The best man shifted uncomfortably, clearly reluctant to be the bearer of bad news. Slowly, Katie stepped forward.
“Um... Josie,” she began, and a chill swept over me. “There’s something you need to know...”
I didn’t catch the rest of her words, though her lips moved rapidly. I didn’t need to hear the details to understand the gravity of the situation. The somber expressions on everyone’s faces confirmed what I already feared.
“Josie...” Katie called out, others reaching for me too, but instead of allowing them to console me, I pushed past the group, my emotions boiling inside me.
“Hey, Josie!” another voice called after me, but I didn’t stop.
With a forceful shove, I pushed the best man back, causing him to stumble. Though he reached out toward me, I refused to let him stop me. Tears welled in my eyes as I fled, my heart cracking apart. As I stormed through the hallways, ignoring the curious looks of the assembled guests, I could hear voices calling out to me, pleading for me to stop. But I ignored them, my determination propelling me forward.
Bursting through the exit, I tore the veil from my head and discarded it, kicking off my shoes and hitching up my dress as I fled. Cars lined the street, but my eyes fixated on the waiting limo. I moved toward it. The driver, unsuspecting, stood nearby taking a break.
“Drive,” I commanded, gripping his arm tightly.
His startled eyes met mine. “What’s going on?”
“Drive, now,” I insisted, desperation lacing my voice.
“Where to?”
“Anywhere. Just away from here.”









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