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Chapter 1 was ok

"I am looking forward to reading the rest. Hard to give an opinion right now, but there are hints at more to come. The writer can craft a world. "

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System Genesis

"The story is interesting and has potential to be an extraordinary story. I'm hooked on it so far and can't wait to see where the author takes it."

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