Inkitt
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"I really enjoyed the story and the writing style. I love erotic stories of helplessness out of my comfort zone. I sometimes step out of my zone when I'm alone and bored because my mind eventually wanders to erotic fantasy on it's own. I have actually, after midnight, walked out of the front door of my house completely naked all the way down to my mailbox on the street like I'm checking my mail. Standing there where anyone including my neighbors might look out and see me is breathtaking. I used to hold back only standing at my open front door naked without lights on very late at night but somehow progressing further which is scary. I hope you continue this storyline pushing her further and further into doing things at her office during work even. Thank you."

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