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amazing

"this reads like a sensual and romantic pokemon nostalgia. i get vivid glimpses of the landscape, detailed imagery, and journeying from gyms and place to place, like watching the animated series in my mind's eye. it is at times innocent and playful and at times suspenseful, and extremely romantic. Lucario and Diaa share a deep passionate bond thats obvious from the very beginning, but you can watch things heat up and intensify as time progresses. i really enjoy reading this"

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