What is your opinion?
Interesting
"Interesting story line so far. A mystery for sure."
Fast paced
"A few times the wrong he/she pronoun has been used which is slightly confusing. You can see the eagerness and excitement of the author to get their ideas written down which is making for a good storyline but it needs a good proofread and edit. "
Great story
"The story is great, but very hard to follow because the author seems to be writing it in a language she isn't familiar with, or maybe it's the translator. Also, she'll refer to someone who hasn't been introduced, yet, at all, so you have no idea who the character is she's talking to or about! The story is good enough to go back and reread these parts to try to figure it out, but sometimes you just can't! Before the book is published it HAS to have a professional editing!"
