What is your opinion?
Author
"Authour here Lets be fair here try it you will not regret reading it...as for Starting chapters will not be catching but slowly story will pick pace... Don't forget to review even you can throw curses at me i am not a noble writer and also its my first novel. "
A Cosmic Tale
"This story gave us a slow start, but we were able to get an exciting fight scene in the 13th and 14th chapters! Parts of the story are a reminder of 'I am number four'. And this story is filled with the possibility of more excitement and otherworldly occurrences, especially regarding the main character Max. The author does a good job of staying on course with the main characters. However, there were a few formatting and grammatical errors that effected the readers impression of the story. I think that the author could work on story structure a bit. Maybe he can share a little more as to what makes max so special. In the early chapters scenes seem to jump a little, if he works on the story structure it will transition more smoothly. And be able to grab and maintain the reader's attention. By chapter 7 the story picks up and the battle scene was good! So sad what happened to Sarah! T-T So my note doesn't apply to the battle part :) Anyhoo, it seems like the author truly cares about his story. Let's hope Max can defeat the monsters!"
