Inkitt
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"I really love the authors writing style and plot for all of authors books. I really love and enjoy reading them"

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Please add about their first night, can you please add about kinks and character plays please....

"Story is good, I liked writting style. "

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Great work

"Great Indian book"

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Loved it

"It's a wonderful story, beautiful storyline, and the smut parts are to die for"

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Nice

"I love this story"

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Overall it's Too Good

"Everything is sooo good about this story the plot , the romance ,the emotional connection between main leads is just fantastic 😍"

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His Heer

"A mind-blowing story! The author did a marvelous job with the storyline. Carry on author!"

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Good but could be more better

"It was good but if author could provide more details it'll be incredible. I'm a author too and soon going to write a book more better than this "

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Together ❤️ love, Family Friends are world 🌎 ❤️

"I LOVED THIS CAN U SHARE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS WHAT A LOVE, RESPONSIBILITY CARE,MOTHER,YUVRAJ SAANVI LOVE IS EXAMPLE FOR REALITY IN OUR WORLD 🌎 CARE OF EACH OTHER AND REVELLING TRUTH WITH HELP OF FRIENDS What a great, eternal life story loved it I SPENT WHOLE MY TIME READING AND WAITING FOR THIS NOVEL I HAD BEAUTIFULL TIME READING AND ENJOYING EACH AND EVERY MOVEMENT HAD AN AMAZING, LOVING, GLORIOUS TIME I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER AS WELL TRUELY PRECIOUS TRUE WORTHY OF OUR TIME MAY GOD BLESS U WITH LOVE,CARE,HAPPINESS AND SMILE😍💕👏🏅👌🌈👏👏👏👌❤️✨🏅🌈💕💝 PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER STORY I AM WAITING FOR U I AM HINDU AND I STAY IN HYDERABAD I WISH I CAN MEET U AND TALK TO U I LOVE YOU U UNDERSTAND OUR GIRLS PROBLEM AS TRUST AND HONESTY AND HAPPINESS AND LOVE PEACFULL I WANT TO MEET U MOST AMAZING LOVELY GIRL HOPE FULLY I WANT TO SEE YOU AND HAVE A GIRL CHAT AND GOSSIPING INFACT DIENG TO MEET U 💝⚡❤️🫰🌈✨❤️"

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FOR AUTHOR~

"I love the author writing skills. She just makes it so imaginable and realistic. It's one of the best erotica book with hindi dialouges!! ♡ Just a advise for author if they can use pictures/gifs more."

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first night,pregnancy sex, Please write these down

"first night,pregnancy sex, Please write these down "

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I am enjoying it till now...

"I'm enjoying it till now ☺️"

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fabulous

"hey author the way you write stories are commendable , I really love your stories especially your characters , the dominant male lead and the submissive female . Your writing skills are really appreciable"

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🤌🏼🤌🏼👌🏼

"Finally…..i have waiting for so long🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼🤌🏼"

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Sein Untergebener

"Ein durchaus gelungener Roman mit viel Emotionen .Sehr schön fand ich die Kapitel der Verlobung,Hochzeit und Geburt.,da flossen auch auch bei mir ein paar Tränen. Schade nur das bis zu Kapitel 14 hinter den indischen Sätzen keine deutsche Übersetzung stand,somit ging ein Teil des Lesegenusses verloren.Gut fand ich das man bei der Hochzeit etwas Einblick in die indischen Traditionen und Rituale bekommen hat.Die Bilder mit der Traditionellen Kleider fand ich sehr gut ,doch die anderen unnötig ,weil die Geschichte auf ein billiges Niveau gesetzt wird."

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I like the book

"I like the plot"

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Love

"Lovee"

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