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Mrs

"Very good book"

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Amazing

"This is an amazing novel which attracts viewers focus on the story"

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Husband betrayal

"She needs to find happiness and get rid of Joshua "

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What?

"I'm hoping this isn't the end of this? To end it like that was mean. When I started reading it said the woman would die. I'm hoping that is not talking about her actual death. Regardless of who these men are, she needs her revenge. They killed who she was. Her husband, those men, Vanessa and horribly the one she thought of as a friend. All of them deserve to be tortured and know exactly what it felt like. The betrayal, the emotional hurt, the physical pain, the shame and degrading. I actually want her husband to feel regret and shame for what he's done. I want him to remember their happy time together and how he betrayed and ruined it all. I'm sorry, but your writing makes this very real feeling. I'm a very vengeful person and I believe women should always have their vengeance. She could die after that. Maybe her husband can watch her die before he dies from the torture inflicted on him. It would be great if you could say when more would be written, and how often so I can look for it. "

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