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wow

"i can't describe how i feel about it. Just Wow. Amazing writing. "

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Review

"I wrote something down in the comments, but it didn’t show up here so I’m kind of gonna repeat the same thing... I thought that Suzanne might have something to do with things. It was kind of like brewing in the background your writing is fantastic as a good writer. You have your readers wanting more, but can we get more? What’s next?"

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Wow

"Wow I wasn't sure about this one at first but holy crap im hooked!!! I hope it continues and please tell me everything is mixed up and the dad isnt the one who is possibly the bad guy! Please tell me it ends up being the stupid mom, because at my age I am not afraid to admit that I want the dad and son to be together. Even if it isnt permanent. "

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Good story

"I'm loving the story so far "

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Good story

"This book is well written. There’s a lot of great smut and the plot is choking!"

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Owned

"Hot damn they’re both very muscle n hope 2 hear t next chapter "

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LOOOOOVVVVVVVE!

"This book and storyline is so f'ing hot! Thank you Author for creating such a masterpiece! "

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Idek what to say

"It's the mom isn't it I knew it 😭"

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Owned

"This is the first book that I read about this category. It is the first time that I have read a book with this topic, although it is not what I normally read but I liked it, I hope that I can continue writing soon."

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Magnificent

"I've loved reading your book and I hope there will be more of this to read "

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Owned

"Good writing !! Many will sneer at the content but at least they are consenting adults"

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Owned

"Owned I did and I did not sure who'd like this style "

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Own

"Very erotic, and sensual and different from most gay stories "

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Owned

"This is something new to me, to be honest. I don't usually read or attempt to watch this genre, but all I can say is I like how the scenes are delivered. I'm envious because it's organized, clean, and easy to understand (that's just my opinion). I'll definitely read more of it for sure."

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Profoundly twisted

"And I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing."

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Humm, I am starting to get scared bout Jrs mom

"Hummm, I am starting to get a bit anxious because this trauma blocked by his mind could possibly be related to Jr's over the top, bigot and super religious mother???"

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Nice

"Nice and weird as well"

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Owned

"I would recommend it's a little unsettling but also very hot.i am stuck on the share part and I'm sure the story is not finished. Please help "

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Father and son tryst

"First of its kind I have read and the story line is shocking but writing style is great"

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