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Daddy’s boy

"It’s good n hot n sexy whoo"

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Amazing

"It was an amazing read. Nothing like Brent or Reylands story but really good as well"

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Una unión bajo la nevada

"No esperaba nada en realidad, no me atrajo al principio por el título en inglés pero cuando lo comenté a leer me sorprendió y sentía que no podía detener de leer más. La primera vez que note que había ciertas palabras en inglés creía que era un error de traducción o escritura pero luego me comenzó a gustar para ser interesante como un tipo de marca personal y divertida."

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AMAZING!

"It is so sinful how much i enjoyed this book! Will definitely be re-reading multiple times over! "

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Loved it!

"This was a great book to read! I loved that the step father always asked for permission to the step son. I also loved that they discovered each other’s slowly."

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Dream wish to reality booster

"As a curious virgin myself, I became excited and aroused by the anticipation this story describes about Robbie’s, and hopefully my, path to experience getting our ass stretched and filled with cum from a large cock and do the same to a guy’s tight ass for the first time."

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Good

"I didn’t like the 3 guys who joined cause I thought it took away from Robbie and Pete….but all over a very good story "

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Great, excellent, wonderful

"Brilliant, excellent, keep writing, luv it."

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Gay in the closet

"This was a great story. Of all gay stories this one felt like it could be a story that could really happen in life. I would love to experience this myself. I would recommend this story to everyone. Can’t wait to read the next part. Great writing by the author. Keep up the good work. Thank you. 😉😊🥰 "

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Lonely@405

"Great storyline excellent characters "

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Cool

"Nice noval"

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Don't know

"Weird Very weird "

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