What is your opinion?
Nice read for it being a short story
"I liked the plot and the characters. I wish it would have had more backstory although it really didn’t make a big difference. "
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Kimh
"I am really enjoying the story so far. I hope Leah finds the peace and happiness that she deserves and Lilly gets what’s coming to her."
GOOD STORY
"Needs editing. Lots of spelling mistakes "
rejected by my alpha mate
"I hope she finds her second chance mate and he is another alpha!! I pray max never meets his second chance mate once he ends things with Lilly. He didn't have to reject her in front of everyone. He could have told them all to leave. And she should be pissed at her sister!! Knowing full well she should have stepped aside for the true mates "
Rejected by my alpha mate
"There are quite a few grammatical errors. "
No bad
"If you can overlook the missing words, miss spelled words, and the jumping around, it's not bad. The plot is what got me interested, and I have continued reading for the same reason. Keep writing, the more you do it the better you get. "
