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Simply brilliant!

"Well, not really simply because there is nothing simple about the story. It's nail-biting suspense filled story with plot that's totally unpredictable. The whole time you don't really know who to trust, both Valerie and Avon have many surprises up their sleeves but their enemies seem to have their sleeves even deeper and more filed. This story has everything - magic, battles of strong wills and minds, romance, thrill, adventure, plotting, politics, trust, self discovery and improvement, wonderfully thoroughly thought through world... Can't wait for the next book ❤️"

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Luna

"This story was gripping full of tension, magic, and emotion. Valerie’s loyalty and fear felt so real, and the ending hit hard. I loved the power struggle and twists with Mithras. Did you always plan for Mithras to betray them like that, or did it come to you while writing?"

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Amazing storyline

"Love the plot twist and the mystery. The story is a puzzle.The main character seems always a puzzle piece away from the solution which keeps it intresting! "

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honest review

"i love the twists and tales of your book i have completed 2 parts of your book in 4 to 5 days i am looking forward for the next "

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