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What is your opinion?
Storyline liked my siblings and friends
"Love the story and characters would recommend it to anyone who likes a good drama"
Shadowed Desires the Unwanted Mate
"Poor use of the English language. A tad convoluted and immature this far. Hope it improves. "
D.D
"It is very hard to follow the story line when the author uses the same pronouns for each character. For example when talking about a female the author uses he, instead of she. "
Poorly written
"Sentences are repeated several times in one paragraph... English is not used correctly. Grammar is very poor and use or he, him she, her is confusing. "
