Pulled me in immediately!

"It usually takes me a little bit to be taken in by a story; I tend to give a book 3 or 4 chapters before deciding if I want to keep going, but this one pulled me in in the first 3 or 4 paragraphs. I love the imagery and characters, especially the main characters. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors, but that's like all of us without professional editing, and they don't pull away from the story. I can't wait to read on!"