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"The storyline is unexpected and imaginative. Keep up the good work!"

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Feedback

"I really thought he was different too. But clearly he has some demons too. Glad I didn't live in the era"

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Things sure seem bleak

"It's giving alternative earth. At first, I thought they were slaves or prisoners of war. Pretty bleak beginning, but I'd read on. For fans of I woke up in another world type of vibes. If it's supposed to be a romance, it's not immediately evident. Interesting premise though. Shows everyone preparing for a man's arrival. Presumably the ML"

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