What is your opinion?
Great Potential
"The writing style is practical, the characters are written nicely as well as the pace is also something I'd enjoy in a horror story for a build up. Though here is one suggestion, try to make a descriptions of characters a bit shorter what you have written is nothing wrong just reduce it a bit. Aside that, this is a great story! "
Less is not more
"This "book" may have been a good idea but the mis spelled words, the lack of punctuation, the horrendous way words are thrown together makes one think English is not the primary language here. Almost ready to drop the "book"."
Scary reality
"The title of the book and the setting of the story are well done. The writing style is good, and the choice of actors is also good. Sometimes, some details in the story are not important and should be minimized. Instead, focus on using dialogue tags and cues."
Scary reality
"I like the idea of the story. Like the characters, seem pretty realistic. There are many mistakes in spelling and word usage. "
