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Unforgettable

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Summary

When the broken girl becomes the player so she is no longer hurting, and the playing boy falls head over heels in love. What does Oblivion mean? Personally to me, endless amounts of girls who know how to give good head. Oh, and if they're really good...I'll make them quiver in return. Under no circumstances will I change, no-one can tame this guy. First is the band, my brothers, our music. Then I'll make time for the groupie bitches, after all a man needs to get his dick wet. I wouldn't be Zeke Matthews otherwise. How much bad luck can a girl have? I got my fairytale wedding, married my prince charming and was supposed to live happily ever after. One problem with that, he turned out to be an ogre. Something snapped within me and I just went crazy, completely way out of character. That was until I smacked, yes smacked right into 6'4 of thick, lean muscle. I never stood a chance, no matter how much I pleaded. I was addicted and our story was going to be Unforgettable.

Status
Complete
Chapters
24
Rating
4.7 (37 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue (Paisley)

“Oh, sweetheart, you look beautiful.” The sequins on my ivory wedding gown shimmer in the sunlight filtering through a sheer curtain as I beam a smile at my father. Praise from Daddy is like chocolate during a diet day, and I soak it up. After all, today is a big day. After three years, I’m minutes away from becoming Mrs. Smith it’s plain, but I don’t care. It means I have found my prince and made him mine.

I swallow the excitement so it can churn in my belly rather than my throat, and I can form words

“Thanks Dad, I run my palms down the soft lace skirt billowing from my hips. “I’m so nervous…I just want to get down there and get this thing done. I’m tired of being a fiancé. I want to be a wife.” I have spent months planning and preparing, booking flights to Manchester, talking to a wedding planner…months of anticipating my perfect day.

“I know, sweet pea, but you’re just gonna have to hold onto your horses for a little bit. ” He’s right. Mush and I have been together for five years. What’s a few more minutes?

We met on the golden sands of Miami Beach. I never expected romance, and I certainly didn’t think it would end up being more than a fling, but every day, I fell more in love with him. Now, he’s going to be mine. All mine.

I continue to talk with my Dad about the little things, and before I know it I am about to head down the stairs. However before we can even make an attempt of a move, Dad’s called off to help Mama, and yet again I find myself having to stand here waiting.

A cold shiver creeps down my back, on one of the hottest days on record in the United Kingdom. I move my gaze swiftly to the window, admiring the clear blue skies. There’s not a single cloud in sight.

I can see the final guest walking around into the beautiful gardens here in Walton. The flowers are in full bloom, and I can’t help but smile at the perfect picturesque day before me.

Movement to my right catches my eye, I look, smiling, as I suspect it’s my Dad. Mama must have finished chewing his ear off about something or other not entirely important about today. I can’t help but smile and laugh to myself at the thought of Daddy standing with her, nodding as she goes on about so and so, or as she shares a piece of gossip too juicy to wait for her daughter to walk down the aisle.. My fingers still play with the white gold bracelet Mush had sent to my room, a single charm engraved Forever Together.

“Is it time to make me a wife, Dad?”

“Unfortunately the wedding is off. We have plans. Remember?”

Before it registers that the voice doesn’t belong to my dad, a tall figure slams his body into mine, his arms squeezing my torso so tight the air whooshes from my lungs. I can’t move. As I open my mouth to scream, he clamps his hand against my face. If he wrinkles my dress….

“Now, now. I gave you plenty of opportunity to pay up. It’s time to make good.” I don’t recognize the voice, or the feel of the body wrapped like a snake around mine, and I don’t have any idea what he’s babbling about, but my dress is too big for me to shove my leg backwards into the part of him where I could do the most damage.

As soon as he moves his palm off my lips, I let out a wail “Let me go! Let me go now!”

My heart is pounding. My perfect day is falling apart, and some deranged idiot thinks I have a debt to pay. A cloth is placed over my mouth, a sickly smell begins filling my lungs as I try to breathe.

“Maybe I should clarify” his mouth directly against my ear, I can feel his teeth graze my flesh with each word he speaks. “It’s your Dad who owes the debt.”

“Daddy?”

“Yes, something about needing some hard cash to pay for his little girls wedding.” Oh God. I try to scream again, but the room starts to spin around me. My eyes roll to the back of my head, and darkness builds around me.

“Not yet kitten,” the cloth is removed from my mouth. Greedily I suck in some clean air. “Where was I? Ahhh yes, you’d think I’d fly over five thousand miles for nothing? No, but this caused for a personal touch.” He chuckles and shakes his head, “I’m all for making everlasting memories.”

I know there’s some kind of commotion nearing us,

“Ahhh just in time, I was wondering if you had ran out on your daughter”

“Dusty please, she has nothing to do with this.”

“Daddy” my voice wobbles as I look at the man who means the world to me and so much more. I can’t believe a word this man has said, Daddy wouldn’t need to do business with someone like this. We have money, my parents have worked hard all their lives and saved every last penny.

“Sweet pea, everything is going to be ok I promise.”

“So very touching…say Goodnight” before I even know what is happening the mystery man who I presume is Dusty smothers a pungent-smelling cloth over my nose and mouth. As I breathe, a tangy coating blankets my tongue, and the room spins in wide circles. My eyes roll back, and noises blur into one right before the darkness grows strong..I try to make out what’s happening. Noises blur into one as the darkness gathers strength.

“She…Let…Go…” Nothing I can’t form anything.

“Time’s up! You now need to pay the price.”

Silence.

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did she just get "taken" minutes before her wedding?! Omagosh!

7 years
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before wedding

6 years
author

There’s something profoundly human in your writing. You don’t just build characters, you unfold them. Their emotions, flaws, and little sparks of hope make the story feel heartbreakingly alive. It’s rare to see writing that captures both pain and beauty so effortlessly. This chapter in particular carried a quiet strength; it hit harder than I expected, and it stayed. You’ve created something that resonates on a soul level.

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