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UNFORGETTABLE

"Zeke and Paisley..i love ypu guys..thank you Lumi..morree power and inspirations to you..keep it up"

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Great book!

"You are doing a great job! Cannot wait to read more!"

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Unforgettable

"Short,steamy ,passionate and a good story!"

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Come back

"Great read, can't put it down"

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Unforgettable

"Awesome short romance with a lovely ending! Well done! ❤️"

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Unforgettable

"Thanks author. "

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❤❤❤❤❤

"Wasn't sure if I was going to like where this story went, however it was a nice surprise. Set aside a couple of hours and I was finished. Love it! Nice amount of story, sexy time and length. Look forward to reading other characters stories from this plot. Thanks 💋 12/03/2022"

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Unforgettable

"Cute little book. Amazing writing for your first. Wish it was longer and we find out what happens with Dusty but still a good read. "

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Unforgettable

"That was nice! I do hope you’re writing a sequel to the story. 😉"

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Great book

"A nice read. Loved the style. "

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Loved it super cute and sexy

"World wind romance Loved it 🥰 "

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Unforgettable

"Enjoyed this story especially Paisleys character. "

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Good

"Very interesting "

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Beautiful

"The was great I’m happy I found this book ... it’s so hard finding good books to read ❤️❤️"

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1234wac

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Especially tht u didn't waste our time with all this extra unnecessary fluff. Impeccable writing ✍. Im looking forward to reading more from you. Ty soooo much."

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Can't wait to read more

"I wished the book was longer when I started it and got hooked. But it turned out to be a very good read leaving an opening for another book about Blake and London also the future for all of them. Can't wait to read more from this author."

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Unforgivable

"This was a beautiful story. I would love to see it continue. The characters were beautifully written. The backstory could use some tweaking, but overall it was a nice read. "

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Very good

"Very good intense "

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Amazing

"I love the way it was written and how the story progressed. Very good book!"

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Unforgettable

"First of all, very well done! Great job of painting the picture. The only downside (if one can even call it that) is the story progresses quickly because it's short. Maybe I just enjoyed it too much and needed/ wanted more.😏 A roller coaster ride for sure. I "awwed", clutched my invisible pearls, laughed, and fanned myself from the steamyness🤯 KUDOS!!!"

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