Inkitt
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Between erotic and suspenseful

"I’m delighted by the way this short story is narrated. The scents, the details, the atmosphere is incredible. It surrounds the imagination with sensuality and suspense! Keep this good work coming!!!"

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"This was really dark🥹😭 Poor Bastian"

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