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The land of umbrellas

"I always enjoy your stories!! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!! "

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Sweetest story!

"Though it was a very short story it was packed with so much! I just loved how the characters developed and I could feel how happy they were in the end. "

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Loved it

"Loved your work. I thought as this is very short story it will not be good. But damn i loved all the character. Marissa included. The main female lead's character is superb ❤️"

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The Land of Umbrellas

"Great short story. A damsel in distress with her knight and umbrella to the rescue. Thank you!"

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Great read

"This story is great! Compelling plot and nice progression that's not too fast or dragged out. The authors writing style is nice and flows easily."

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Charming, cute and funny

"With a kind, pretty, bit naive but funny and well meaning leading lady and two brothers who with totally different characters, this story has all the ingredients for a very good read. Having read the first few chapters I am looking forward to cuddle up on the sofa with a nice cup of tea with the rest of the story. "

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