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Really great ideas
"I love the uniqueness of your story ideas, it’s really a fun book to read. Some grammatical issues, it the story shines through. Great job!"
An imaginative tale.
"An imaginative tale! This is a lightheatred story that covers a group of friends! My note to the author would be to create more conflict. What is at stake for your characters? especially the MC Bobby? Conflict accompanied with details will help the reader connect deeper with the characters. This will also elevate the story of the MC. The author made a light hearted adveture. I hope he continues to express his fun ideas!"
