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Sunsets of blood as red roses being burnt and glittering chocolatey eyes, Everlasting fantasies of mine feel like a dream under crimson skies... Loving you with all of me,never hoping for anything,somehow it feels too right- Forever my one clung on to me and I know your thorns won't hurt, just "hold me tight" Living to live with my love,looming shadows prance like horses in my little head- Echoing voices run in my mind,they mock me-"You will lose him",no,they never fade... Stab me to death and I'll be sorry to stain your glory with my blood,nah I would not fight- Stars and galaxies are pretty indeed but your beauty was blessed by a woeful-hushed starry night. Lost myself on the way only for you to find me,so now it's my turn to return your ecstasy, Our tales will reign the world,that's why to the Lord I pray- "bless them with immortality" Violins play obscure tunes and candles melt to wax,amidst this chaos your love's my only warmth- Even if death grasps us and the last star in the sky burns,I would follow you to the end of this Earth. #SelflessLove
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