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She can't help it

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Summary

This is a story about a girl who feels like she is alone, she feels like everyone in her friend group is fake, she could be surrounded by a bunch of people but feel so lonely, Until the day a special person came into her life and changed her life forever. This is a work in progress pls don't judge and pls trust the process

Genre
Drama,Romance
Author
Ashrah
Status
1yr ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The beginning

Hello, My name is Brooklyn i am 16, I am a Taurus my birthday is April 26th, I go to a middle/high school and i have loving family.


One day Brooklyn gets woke up by a loud crash, she runs down her steps and she seen that her front window was broken, And she had got scared she could see a tall skinney figure, In the kitchen but she didnt move but then the figure turned towards her, She starts to run back upstairs but the black figure gets her ankle, And starts to drag her down the steps, But then out of nowhere Brooklyns mom hits the black figure in the back of the head with a frying pan, The black figure falls to the floor and then brookyln and her mom run towards the front door to get out and they hear another crash, The black figure had broke the back window to get out, The girls run back in the house to see if anything was took, and then Brooklyn starts to cry because the Black figure had took her great grandmothers necklace but the strange thing was that the figure didnt take anything else, The mom told Brooklyn to go back to bed and she would clean the glass.


Brooklyn woke up and started to get dressed for school, And she put a cute black skirt and a black crop-top with black fish net stokings and 3 inch black boots and all her jewelry, She grabbed her backpack and said goodbye to her mother, she walked to school and she was soon greeted by her friends, she had told her friends what had happend but they didnt believe her, So she kept her mouth shut she kept listening to her friends gossiping about a dumb boy they wanted, and she listened to their problems but everytime she tried to say something they shut her down really quick,she got tired of them talking about boys all the time, She was one of those screw boys i need to focus on my work not relationships kinda person, But class had ended and they walked out of class, And like always they were like omg there is caleb, And brooklyn just rolled her eyes, But then she and caleb had made eye contact and he had smirked at her and winked, she was thinking, Omg whats this feeling? whats going on with my stomach? She told her friends that she had to get to class, they all went to class only to find that Brooklyns assigned seat was right next to calebs, She sat down beside him and He wispered in her ear with a very deep and raspy voice "You know ur kinda cute right i would love to take u out" She screamed in her head she whispered back "Fine but dont think im gonna act like a girly girly you know like a barbie doll" so if thats what ur looking for keep walking.

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