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You need to be my first

"I love this story very much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Very Cute

"This was a very cute, short story. I absolutely adored it. Would’ve loved a little more information on the last chapter but was still very happy with it. Author did a great job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️"

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really sweet

"really sweet, wish there was more"

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Want more!

"So sweet, want more!"

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Loved It 😍

"Very sweet story that will make you 😀 and think "Life is good.""

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Wonderful!!

"Amazing quick read!! Emotional and heartfelt and just very wholesome! The chemistry between the two main characters is phenomenal!"

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I really loved it

"It was so sweet! I loved it! "

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You Have to Be My First

"I thought Jake and Olivia were adorable from the get go. They were sweet 😍 and thoughtful towards each other and loved that they finally we're communicating with each other. Thank you 😊 for a wonderful ❤️ story!!! 🌺😍🤙😍🌺"

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You need to be my first

"Cute little short story loved it. Well written. Can’t wait to read more of your stories."

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You Need To be My First

"This is a quick read filled with humour, love, friendship and all round warm fuzzies that you won’t regret reading and feeling. Give it a go"

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You need to be my first

"Damn like am in love with the story line. Imagine looking for the perfect person for you only to find out you were searching far and the person has always been with you. That's Jake and Olivia is love story. I was hooked from the word go. "

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Fast and warm!!

"It's a fast-flowing book but still contains readers! The end was clear, but it was still enjoyable to read. Thank you. "

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Sooo cuttee!!!

"Such a cute, short, and sweet story. This has two of my favorite tropes, and the writing was also good!"

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Excellent

"Romantic, funny, and heartwarming!"

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Yes

"Yyessss good "

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❤️❤️❤️

"Short, cute and sweet 🥰❤️"

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You Need to be my First!

"Loved the story! It was short but sweet! Two people that were friends but later realized they loved each other!"

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Nice

"It was a cute short story kinda wanted her parents reaction but it was still nice "

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Cute!

"Sweet story love their friendship. Short but I liked how it progressed and there was no major drama just a friendship turned into love story. "

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You Need To Ve My First

"Thank you for a good story , great plot and characters .Well done "

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