What is your opinion?
Interesting
"So far the story is interesting"
HIS TROUBLE
"Your storyline seems to be inspired from ana huang's Twisted love which really makes me giggle. The fmc has a really strong sura and name that makes me relate to her. Enemies to lovers ah! how they make my stomach churn with suspense and excitement. The plot is yet to come but your blurb is REALLY INTERESTING. You are doing a very good job and also try to improve you words a little and use something with more sarcasm. It would suit the FMC alot. Your welcome! "
Good start
"The premise of the book seems promising, the nice brother’s best friend and enemy trope are really good. It does need some more editing in terms of grammar, it makes the sentences hard to read but you’re doing well! I like their names, they remind me of Twisted Love by Ana Huang so I don’t know if you also got your inspiration from that book. Hope to see your book flourish and prosper author. Good start. "
