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"Very well written story! I love how you write Snape here. Most stories I have read choose between two different kinds of Snape, an overly kind one or a cold hearted one. You have blended his personality perfectly, he is still that calculating potions master we know and love, but he also has a heart that does care. I know you said this is your first fanfiction and I have to applaud you on an excellent job! I hope you continue to write more fantastic stories!"