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The ruined Luna

"Great story. Is there a next book?"

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Very fun to read

"I'm loving the story so far, my only real complaint is the spelling and grammar issues. To take a breath is different than letting yourself breathe , as an example. It's basic stuff that's easily overlooked by sp3ll checkers unless they are able to use context to provide the correct fix. The story is great and I'm loving the way its unfolding, it's very relaxing to read a well thought out story 😀 "

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Omg

"I enjoy great writing and imagination, you’ve done well. But don’t leave me hanging! Lol Thank you for sharing your story with us."

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The ruined Luna

"I really like this story and can’t wait to read more. I think you can get the Luna’s character and point across without so much cussing. Cussing doesn’t bother me but in this case, I think it comes across a little too strong. "

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The ruined Luna

"Enjoying the story. Where can I find the completed book?"

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love it

"i absolutely love this story so far! i like the characters and i love the story line so far. cant wait to see what happens next!"

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42 chapters read

"Like the book so far. Says it was last updated in July. Will there be more or is there another book? "

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Amazing work. Excellent. Please update more chapters.

"Amazing work. Excellent. Different from a general werewolf genre. Please update more chapters. "

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Branded

"Very erotic and interesting can't put it down keep on giving us more chapters"

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Intrigued

"I am enjoying this book so far. I am invested in the characters and their journey "

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