Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Unveiling Evan

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

When Sam’s husband, Evan, unexpectedly passes away, she is left to navigate a sea of grief and confusion. But her world is further shattered when she discovers a hidden truth. As she uncovers the depth of his deception, she grapples with feelings of betrayal, anger, and profound loss.

Status
Complete
Chapters
24
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

1 The crash

The rain poured relentlessly against the windshield, transforming the road ahead into a blur. Evan’s hands tightened on the steering wheel. He was already late, and Sam was not going to forgive him. It was their third wedding anniversary—how could he have forgotten? Of all days, he had to choose this one to be late. And to think, this wasn’t even the worst thing he had done recently.


He pressed the gas pedal harder, trying to beat the clock. The restaurant reservation was about to expire, and knowing Sam, she would already be there, waiting impatiently. She would never enter alone, though. Sam reveled in the admiring glances people cast as she walked in arm-in-arm with her handsome husband. The thought made him smile despite his anxiety; they did make a striking couple. Their friends often joked they looked like models in luxury hotel ads—perfect smiles, perfect bodies, the perfect marriage.


Fate seemed to conspire against him, throwing red light after red light his way. A gnawing feeling crept over him, and it wasn’t just the forgotten date. Something else was wrong. Then he noticed his wedding ring was missing from its usual place. Panic surged through him. Had he left it in the room? No, he couldn’t have been that careless. He began patting his front pockets frantically. His cell phone buzzed with a message. He glanced at the sender and smiled briefly but couldn’t read the message now. He had more urgent concerns and tossed the phone into the car’s cup holder. The honk from the car behind jolted him; the traffic light had turned green.


He scanned everywhere for the ring, shifting his eyes between the road and his seat. Maybe it was in his back pocket? He lifted slightly from the seat to check. “There you are!” he exclaimed, pulling the ring out. Just then, the car jolted as it hit a pothole, and the ring slipped from his grasp. Now, Evan was trying to retrieve it while keeping his car in the lane.


He needed more room to reach it, so he unfastened his seatbelt. His cell phone rang, drawing his eyes to the screen. It was Sam. Now he was in real trouble. As he reached for the phone, a loud crash shook his world.


The car spun wildly, glass shattering in every direction. The airbags deployed with a violent thud, hitting him squarely in the head. Pain exploded in his skull, and then, everything went dark.

Let Conejo Blanco know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

2

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

1

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

1

Shocking

Good Writing

1

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

1

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Bear Shifter Secrets

Karen Nagy: This is a wonderful story with warm, endearing characters. It shows growth and acceptance of individual differences combined to make a strong unit. Loved the characters and enjoyed the writing style. Can't wait to read more!

Read Now
To Catch a Ghost, Part 1

Melissa: I like the nice wolves. I don't like the redundancy of her self loathing.

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Susan: Nice short story. I liked it

Read Now
The Cursed Alpha's Fifth Luna

Sami13579: Good plot interesting

Read Now
SECRET BILLIONAIRE

Veekay186: I really like the storyline and will recommend it for a relaxing read. It shows love is a sweet light.

Read Now
Going For The Goalie

Willow: I loved this book so much and hope you write a series about it

Read Now
The Iron Crown

trlc: I found myself not skipping chapters as I usually do and thoroughly enjoyed the read.

Read Now
After Letting Go

S: I am absolutely hooked on this novel! The plot is incredibly engaging, filled with twists that keep you turning the pages, and the pacing is perfect. The author has a fantastic writing style that brings the world and characters to life beautifully.The only reason I didn't give it a perfect score acr...

Read Now
Bloodlines

Ingibabes511: Thank you for an amazing feast of wordsmithing excellence. Every tick box was covered somewhere within the story. Loved the characters that appeared in the story and how it played out was beautifully crafted. The nuances and descriptions making this a lovely story to read.💜🥰💜

Read Now