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Loved "teach you , teach me" on Galatea and I love this look even more !

"Loved "teach you , teach me" on Galatea and I read on the discussion board there that you had written this book on Inkitt. I love this look even more than the other . It has a great plot and the characters are really unique. I do enjoy the added detail and added heat to the spicy scenes. Amazing book "

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"Hi there! I'd love to dive into your story, but the link took me to the general Inkitt reviews page—could you share the story title or a direct link to the actual chapter? I'm genuinely curious: what inspired this particular tale, and which character's voice came to you first? Also, what's the emotional core you hope readers walk away with? Would love to hear more about the world you're building!"

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Amazing had me locked in.

"Not only could I not stop reading to save my life. You gave me great character buildup and had me consciously connecting with each chapter I came across. So thank you and bravo! Five stars all the way around."

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Nice read

"Love the banter between these 2 only wish they would own up to how they feel for each other "

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Any updates coming???

"I love this story but I have been waiting for an updated chapter for 3 months. Any idea when a new chapter will be released????"

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The Ice Next Door

"Great story. Great writing. Can’t wait to read more."

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The Ice Next Door

"Great story! Can’t wait for an update!!"

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The ice

"This book is incredibly well written, the character development is great and the storyline is refreshing "

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Hot, hot, hot

"Sex scenes are spicy, and sexy. I don’t love that the female protagonist is repeatedly called a stalker, and lysts after this guy for 4 years. It makes it hard for me to think she has any self worth, but great read otherwise "

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Updates ?

" I am addicted to this book. Do you think you’ll finish it and send out some more chapters ? I’m dying to read more. I love the storyline. "

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The ice next door

"Great story, right amount of spice. Happy bits and sad bits. Can't wait to finish it"

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Love

"They are in love after this night their emotions are only going to be deeper for each other and they will make love again and again "

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More please!

"Don't leave us hanging! I want more! I need more! "

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Not finished yet, but it hooked me anyway

"I always wait until books are done to binge and then review.. until now, I guess! Had to make my thoughts known because I'm hoping the book will be finished. I threw ALL my own rules away by reading this as someone who doesn't read sports romances and tries to avoid romances with teens because they make me feel awkward; I was greatly rewarded by doing so. The plot hooked me immediately; the contract concept reminds me a little of A Walk to Remember, but this is funnier, way spicier, and of course there's the addition of falling for your stalker lol. You do not get lost in hockey jargon, and it's certainly not cringey even though these characters are teens. Really good book, and I'm hoping for more updates!"

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The Ice Nextdoor

"Yay!!! They're a couple now!!! I'm so happy. I hope they stay together and get married and have babies!!! Star hockey player and his wife and kids... bam, new book, lol"

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The Ice Next Door

"Bloody LOVE IT ! I have just binge read this in one swoop - so please , please write those chapters quickly 💕💕"

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One of the best reads I've encountered

"Absolutely loved this story. Pity it ended this way as I would have loved to read when the contract came to a end. Keep up the good work! "

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Entertaining

"This is a good easy read. Even though you know where its going it still keeps you coming back for more. "

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This!!

"Hooked on the attraction of these two. The boldness of the girl and the fight in the guy. It’s so much different from other stories no hiding behind much for the girl she is straight up and to the point and that’s what makes this book so worth reading "

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The Ice Next Door

"I really love this book! The characters are fun! It has funny moments, really spicy writing and just a journey that you can’t help but enjoy! As well as I love Hockey and love the links to the sport!! I so hope this wins the contest and can not wait to see how this one ends such a good book and Seb is soo my new book crush 🥰"

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