What is your opinion?
Great story
"I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more. This is a very interesting story with lots of twists and turns."
Alpha king Xavier
"Waiting on more chapters are they coming out soon."
Alpha king xavier
"Completely hooked on the mystery "
Alfa
"I hope that one day she will be a true Luna and find evidence"
Sliver wolf
"Gret great GREAT performance in writing "
Alpha king xavier
"I have enjoyed this book so far. Can't wait to see what happens. I hope xavier gets what he deserves and is left alone and lonely autumn should just reject him and kick him into touch as hes going to betray her in the end "
Interesting read
"I started to read this book because the storyline intrigued me. I would love to read these books and correct the grammar and the incorrect words. I still just enjoy this book for the interest in unique stories"
Seems short
"So far so good! Not sure how it’s gonna end with just 129 pages"
Review
"The characters are great.The story is more sad than I expected so far but still a nice story lol ne.you don't want to put this book down."
Xavier the alpha
"He needs to find out that Gwen left cause the type of person he is"
Is it worth the wait?
"Although I am enjoying the story, I didn't find out the Alpha's name until chapter 20? I'm not quite sure if I like him but I want Gwen to please show up. Please speed up the plot. "
Alpha king Xavier
"Story plot is good..would like to read more."
Great start
"Liking what I’m reading so far "
Alpha Xavier
"Need more chapters"
not my cup of tea, to be polite
"*Disclaimer: I did only read to chapter 13, and I'm going to share my honest opinion. Sorry if you take offense. No, you are not in any world a bad writer, this is just a bad book. Much like a slasher film, this story has no clear plot. Unlike a slasher film, however, we don't get the mercy of everyone (but Elixir, I love her) dying and the story being over. The plot seems to mainly focus on sex. Just sex. That's it. I'm not kidding. She forgets about saving her parents, or helping ANYONE, the actual second Xavier touches her. (More like rapes but ok. Trigger warning? Where are you??) (Let's not forget her pack was slaughtered and her parents imprisoned so that she could hopefully save them all and avenge the death of her friends and packmates, but she literally could not care less.) She's supposed to pretend to be the kidnapped Luna, and figure out where the real one is, but wait, hold on, she's back to lusting over Xavier. Um, okay, then. Maybe she'll focus on surviving being trapped with the most dangerous Alpha King in the world? Because, you know, she has received various and violent threats of death? Nope, the only thing she is trying to survive is the nights with Xavier so she can have more later on! Perhaps she'll try to stop a possible war that could end in the death of thousands? Think again. I don't need to detail what she wants instead. There is no worldbuilding, no loveable characters (Elixir is by far my favorite but is still not fleshed out nearly enough), nothing except for smut galore. Should've known what I was getting into when I saw the title and read the line about the tears falling from under her "naturally long lashes" (in her POV, too. If Xavier had been complimenting her I wouldn't have gotten such an ick, but she said that about herself). 🙄 I don't usually support the burning of books, but I would support the incineration of this one. Don't read if you're looking for something you will want re-read or an experience you will vaguely enjoy. Or if you hate spice. This is. . . unnecessarily spicy. Random picky notes: - Underscores instead of dashes, or just random underscores. (Why? Genuinely curious.) - Bungled phrases such as "I swallowed hard on my itchy throat". (Not sure how to fix that one. "I swallowed hard as my throat itched", maybe? Or just drop the itch altogether and just say "I swallowed hard".) - Elixir's wasted potential as a super cute lovable sidekick - Nobody having much of a personality or any goals (except to up their body count!) - Unoriginal. Nothing anybody hasn't seen before. (Except the name Elixir. It's kind of cute.) I think the entire purpose of the story was to jump on the werewolf/spicy story bandwagon, but you did not have to worry about missing out, author. Unfortunately, it was not a phase. :') Fix all of this and it would be a readable, quite possibly good, book. As of now, I could only make it to chapter 13 due to the issues listed."
